Blod post for 4-25

The realtionship between the two is that they both are great ways to find out who people really are based on there opinion on the questoion and prompt. I believe theses concepts apply to alot of people one in fact may be my brother because he refuses to realize what I want for him as his younger brother and he uses his street job to blind him from what he really needs in life.

Path and Pen vocab cards

I chose this one for impunity because it looks as if the men are trying to protect the man in the middle located at the left from harm.

I chose this one for punitve because some say that graffiti is a retalitory habit.

I chose this one because it doesn't seem like the cat is minding the camera much.

I chose this for penance because its showing a man with hook and sharp wires put into his skin to signify that he is undergoing a penance to reedem himself from all his wrongdoing's.

I chose this one for sociopath to show what one may look like.

I chose this one for empathy because it signifies someone walking out of there shoes, meaning to me that i've been there before .

I chose this for pathology because it shows an example of what they might study when dealing with genes .

I chose this picture for penal mainly because it shows a direct example of what would happen if you where to throw stones at trains

Prompt- Standardize test

My experience with standardized test is that I don't really care about them all that much. I don't dislike them but I'm not fond of them I mean I would rather do something else but its whatever. I don't recall having any good experiences with them because there not important enough to just remember like that. Yes I believe they are good ways to help evaluate a students level in school.

What really grinds my gears!! in class

What really grinds my gears in class is how everyone responds to a simple topic like a Bing commercial. If you haven't seen on of those commercial, what pretty much goes down is that a guy says something and then his friend responds by saying a whole different topic and then someone hears him and responds with another topic and so on and so on. It's hectic trying to concentrate it never seems like we actually have a lesson because most of the time is spent binging around.

Connect To Life

Sonnet 292 summerize

Sonnet 292

"Sonnet 292" by Francesco Petrarch (1304-1374)

The eyes I spoke of once in words that burn,
the arms and hands and feet and lovely face
that took me from myself for such a space
of time and marked me out from other men;

the waving hair of unmixed gold that shone,
the smile that flashed with the angelic rays
that used to make this earth a paradise,
are now a little dust, all feeling gone;

and yet I live, grief and disdain to me,
left where the light I cherished never shows,
in fragile bark on the tempestuous sea.

Here let my loving song come to a close;
the vein of my accustomed art is dry,
and this, my lyre, turned at last to tears.

My Summarization of Sonnet 292:

1) The way I feel about you makes me different from other men

2) The way I saw you was compared to that of an angle but now the feeling I had is gone because you are gone

3) I hate the feeling of grief growing in the place where i once shared a cherished memory of us

4) As the song for us turns to an end my heart cries for you still again

Critics corner

Marvin Wells Per.4 4-5-11 Critic’s corner #4 I believe that Edgar Quinet is right about saying that “Every moment in our existence contains in itself the substance of a poem” every moment in lifer can be written down and expressed as a poem. For example: if a nerd where to be sitting in a class room and all of a sudden the girl that he has a crush on walks into the room and sits down, (in this short little scene lies a poem); As I sat, gloomy not gay, her absence is blue Her presence is neigh, a vast!! ! She comes and lights my sea!! ! Happy and glee, I smile kind to thee, I cannot wait to fill her place!!! To bathe in her beauty!!! To touch her face!!! Her unhampered love, to get a taste!!! Would please me forever, Should I wait, should I chase, I lay my head down to hide the cherries forming on my face. I will someday for now I wait. And that how you create a poem it’s a real life situation and it covers the feeling and emotions of one person interacting with an element that is natural to the world. So yes I honestly do believe that everyday incidents can indeed be poetic.

Note questions

I judge what makes me a good writer when it really comes down to it. Some occasions others may criticise and let me know if I am a good writer to them. Good writing is not measured by the the skills it measured by the abilty to put thought into paper exactly as you think it. Other wise the readers are confused and sometime things arn't clear to the audience. Qualties that are visible in good wirting would have to be clarity. If the work is easy to read and understand then the look of the writing will be good. Another one would be did the writer explain with enough detail. If so the audience reading the paper shouldnt have to ask questions about the context unless there was a deeper meaning. Another would have to be motivation, some times papers tend to come out looking like barf because the writer was to lazy to make it understandable and fragments will be very visible.