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Monday, April 4, 2011

Note questions

I judge what makes me a good writer when it really comes down to it. Some occasions others may criticise and let me know if I am a good writer to them. Good writing is not measured by the the skills it measured by the abilty to put thought into paper exactly as you think it. Other wise the readers are confused and sometime things arn't clear to the audience. Qualties that are visible in good wirting would have to be clarity. If the work is easy to read and understand then the look of the writing will be good. Another one would be did the writer explain with enough detail. If so the audience reading the paper shouldnt have to ask questions about the context unless there was a deeper meaning. Another would have to be motivation, some times papers tend to come out looking like barf because the writer was to lazy to make it understandable and fragments will be very visible.

Monday, March 1, 2010

Wordle: Essence

Found Poem

Inner truth
My soul wandered over the dark plain
My conscience swept me towards it
People waited patiently in the dark
A patient hope stirred in their dark, brooding eyes
The dark earth was applied to my innocence
Silence, shattered by thunderous hoof beats
The free minds washed away the earth
Men are meant to be free
Luna bound by nature
Marez bound by freedom
Only I know my destiny
by Maestro

Friday, February 26, 2010



I like Flapjack because he loves adventure and so do I. He goes on wild adventures and it's always fun to see what he does. He lives inside a giant whale, I live inside a giant grove of orange trees. He reflects my greatest passion,to go on adventures!!!

Friday, February 19, 2010

Ten second sound off

If someone came up to me and told me that they where engaged in an abusive relationship,I would say well it's a goodthing you realized it was an abusive relationship. Then I would giv heer options on how to get out of it successfully without gtting hurt.

Wednesday, February 17, 2010

Ten sec. Sound off

When I was younger, I wanted to be a basketball player. I worked hard every day and even joined a team. I played only bascketball,until i got to highschool. Now im an all rounder when it comes to sports.